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Sunday, July 9th 2017, 2:06am

Typographical and other kinds of text problems

Kvirasim, Peraine temple: dialogue with the votary:

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The semicircular space with seating made of tree trunks dominates the room around the small alter

altar

Besides there is a switch between present and past tense:

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A votary is carefully arranging a decoration of ferns and wildflowers. When she noticed you, she was giving you an intense look.

When she notices you, she is giving you an intense look.


Character generator:
Courage tooltip:

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This can be useful in a fi ght and help to resist spells

fight

Charisma tooltip:

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A hero with high charisma will have an easier time of infl uencing or at least pacifying

influencing



Tavern game: Knife Throwing:

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The opponents throw the knives on a target which ...

at a target
(and maybe a space is missing between "of 5 feet." and "The"

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The aim is to make the inner ring

to hit

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Punkteverteilung::

Score

And again, switching between present and past tense here:

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Various guest are pushing around the throwers and watched them eagerly. Even the innkeeper paused cleaning a mug. Is that a worried look on his face?

Various guests are pushing around the throwers and watching them eagerly. Even the innkeeper pauses cleaning a mug ...


Then:

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Calissa hits no rings this round.

is it rings, really, or rather "ring"? To me this game sounds like a game of darts (just with knifes), and every round I have to hit one ring, don't I?
Same with

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.... hits the inner rings this round
and

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... hits the fourth rings...


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You can hear occational laughter

occasional

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Tuesday, July 11th 2017, 10:17am

Thanks for checking, included the next update ;)
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